Saturday, October 26, 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors

I hate all manners of evil that walk this world to torment us.
But I really hate goddamn vampires.
And I really hate that I’m a worthless backstabbing lover 
who was reduced to being a sex toy for the goddamn vampires.
And I absolutely hate, that I’m the last, desperate hope of this world.
It's too goddamn much to lay on one girl’s shoulder. 
Too much.

I let myself keep ranting these hateful thoughts in my head, over and over.
Hate sustained, hate endured. 

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19 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 7:55 AM

    That was chilling... I'm already wanting to know more!

    (Your website is gorgeous, by the way :) I love it!)

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    1. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:49 AM

      Thank you! It's a neurotic mess, just like my mind!

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  2. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:06 AM

    Well, you hooked me for sure. I really hate those goddamn vampires too. :D Well done!

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    1. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:44 PM

      Perhaps we could cross. Substitute peanut butter for garlic...LOL

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  3. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:33 AM

    Really well done. Loved the tension this brought on. I could really feel her anger and frustration.

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  4. A.S. FenichelOctober 27, 2013 at 9:43 AM

    Oh my! That's a lot of hating and a lot of information. Great job!

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  5. LindaOctober 27, 2013 at 9:55 AM

    Wow, someone is having a hard hard time and that's a lot of hating!

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  6. JOctober 27, 2013 at 12:48 PM

    So much about her life conveyed in a single 8. Great job! And I definitely find the premise intriguing. An unwilling vamp sex slave...yowza! Methinks she'll either get some revenge on or the right vamp will change her mind--or both!

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  7. Veronica ScottOctober 27, 2013 at 1:01 PM

    A lot there to work with, intriguing. Great 8!

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  8. Chelle CorderoOctober 27, 2013 at 3:18 PM

    The emotion just oozed from the words, terrific 8!

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  9. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 4:03 PM

    Very nice! I was immediately engaged in the narrative, and it's the kind of gruff talk I like from anti-heroic protagonists. Great eight!

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  10. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 4:42 PM

    I love this particular rant from Imogen, it' what really makes you love her as a flawed heroin. great eight.

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  11. Sarah WOctober 27, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    Wow---interesting character and a great premise. Cover is eye catching, too!

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    1. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:42 PM

      Thank you! I love my cover. It's perfect for Imogen's state of mind!

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  12. Heather BoydOctober 27, 2013 at 5:36 PM

    Wow would be an understatement to describe that 8. So much emotion. Well done!

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    1. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 9:43 PM

      Thank you!, she has a major issue to work out.

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  13. Teresa CypherOctober 27, 2013 at 8:27 PM

    Wow! Powerful. I like this character. Pissed off can interesting to read! Nicely done :-) !

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  14. AnonymousOctober 28, 2013 at 4:23 PM

    Yeah, that does seem like an awful lot of hate and an interesting bundle of near-contradictions. Thanks for sharing!

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  15. AnonymousNovember 2, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    Powerful words there.

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