Saturday, October 26, 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors

I hate all manners of evil that walk this world to torment us.
But I really hate goddamn vampires.
And I really hate that I’m a worthless backstabbing lover 
who was reduced to being a sex toy for the goddamn vampires.
And I absolutely hate, that I’m the last, desperate hope of this world.
It's too goddamn much to lay on one girl’s shoulder. 
Too much.

I let myself keep ranting these hateful thoughts in my head, over and over.
Hate sustained, hate endured. 

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19 comments:

  1. That was chilling... I'm already wanting to know more!

    (Your website is gorgeous, by the way :) I love it!)

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    1. Thank you! It's a neurotic mess, just like my mind!

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  2. Well, you hooked me for sure. I really hate those goddamn vampires too. :D Well done!

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    1. Perhaps we could cross. Substitute peanut butter for garlic...LOL

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  3. Really well done. Loved the tension this brought on. I could really feel her anger and frustration.

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  4. Oh my! That's a lot of hating and a lot of information. Great job!

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  5. Wow, someone is having a hard hard time and that's a lot of hating!

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  6. So much about her life conveyed in a single 8. Great job! And I definitely find the premise intriguing. An unwilling vamp sex slave...yowza! Methinks she'll either get some revenge on or the right vamp will change her mind--or both!

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  7. A lot there to work with, intriguing. Great 8!

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  8. The emotion just oozed from the words, terrific 8!

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  9. Very nice! I was immediately engaged in the narrative, and it's the kind of gruff talk I like from anti-heroic protagonists. Great eight!

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  10. I love this particular rant from Imogen, it' what really makes you love her as a flawed heroin. great eight.

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  11. Wow---interesting character and a great premise. Cover is eye catching, too!

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    1. Thank you! I love my cover. It's perfect for Imogen's state of mind!

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  12. Wow would be an understatement to describe that 8. So much emotion. Well done!

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    1. Thank you!, she has a major issue to work out.

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  13. Wow! Powerful. I like this character. Pissed off can interesting to read! Nicely done :-) !

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  14. Yeah, that does seem like an awful lot of hate and an interesting bundle of near-contradictions. Thanks for sharing!

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